Hey guys, I am not so new to the site, I help my brother Dex with it from time to time.. However I haven't been an active member in a LONG time.. so I'm kinda new to it all.. Anyways this is one of my more romantic poems so I hope you all enjoy... And I am open to constructive criticism so feel free to comment.

You are my reason and my reasoning,
you are from which the air I breath, the reason that I be. You are my
thought, my longest everlasting thought, whether it be of eternal
impairment, or of the beauty that can only in suit but to impair my
thought of thriftless meaning and despair. You are my thought of which
I breath from, you are my air. You hold the key to everything within me,
but you trust me not with that key. You are my world to be, you are
everything I wish of me. You are my dream, you are my wake, you are my
reality in this designated state. You are the being I wish I myself
could create.

wow ^_^ thats very nice! ^_^ Thank you for sharing your work ^_^.

That's really nice
I've never really liked WRITING poetry, but I do like READING it

well, i don't have a poem, just like a little song:
"I'm a little goa'uld
Small and stout
Here is my hand device
Here is my staff
When i'm angry and upset
I use them to bring death
And if my jaffa won't protect
They'll get a brain cook up their head
Torture and excrusiating pain
Will make them loyal again"
so...?ok, i know its very very very bad made

YAY! thank you! Nice aktaios

heh, it just came to me a few days before posting, and i thought its funny.still thinking of other

I love poetry myself, but I'm just no good at it. In novelizations poetic descriptions do come up, but I'm not good at legitimate poetry.
Cool to see some here though