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PostSubject: Warp Gate 0012   Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:19 pm

Come August 1, I will be releasing to the internet, the first of what I hope to be many screenplays, for a story called Warp Gate 0012. Now, here's the synopsis.

- Synopsis -
A 2000 foot wide ring is discovered in orbit around Jupiter. When a team of scientists, marines, biologists, and so on, activate it, they are thrown through space, and in turn, deplete the power source of Earth's Warp Gate. Each gate has a cereal number to input, to dig a tunnel through zero space. Earth's number is 0012. Now, the stranded Earthlings join a crew of aliens, trying to avoid the grasp of an alien military, and just trying to get home.
Now, let's address why I'm doing this. I've realized that I love writing screenplays and teleplays. So, I'm doing this to try and get noticed by someone.
Now, a screenplay is not a novel.

- Novel -
Caldwell stepped onto the bridge, hungry for food.
"Who's stolen my golden potatoes?!" he yells.

- Screenplay (not very good format) -
INT. DAEDALUS - BRIDGE
Caldwell steps onto the bridge, hungry for food.

CALDWELL
Who's stolen my golden potatoes?!

I'll release the first one, a nineteen page screenplay, on my website, http://the-new-sg1.forummotion.com
Keep an eye out, on August 1, 2008.
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Wed Jul 23, 2008 5:37 pm

sounds good ^_^ just try not to get it too stargatish ^_^ but if done correctly I think this would be a good idea ^_^

my non-professional advice would be to make it a modern time with alot of military like things added. Like how Stargate sg1 was. It had a military based operation with alot of sci-fi added to it so we could Kinda relate to it in a way. Like how BSG was as well even tho it was more futuristic(the political aspect made it feel more realistic and gave us something to relate too).

This way it gives us something to relate more to on a personal level. Like with SG-1 we could honestly look at it and go "wow! This could ACTUALLY happen!" and on BSG it was like "Wow there aliens but they have the same problems as us." or how I was saying it "Wow the president screws you over no matter what planet you came from!"


just some simple things to possibly consider even tho you already have the stuff down =P


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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Wed Jul 23, 2008 5:42 pm

The whole connection to Stargate is to be expected really, TY by the way Very Happy
The thing is, Jump Gates and Warp Gates have been used in science fiction, ALOT!!!
Jump Gates
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Wed Jul 23, 2008 5:49 pm

Cameron Mitchell wrote:
The whole connection to Stargate is to be expected really, TY by the way Very Happy
The thing is, Jump Gates and Warp Gates have been used in science fiction, ALOT!!!
Jump Gates


thats exactly what I was hopeing you would do hehe ^_^ Cause I dunno....it just gives it a kinda more realistic feel...
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Wed Jul 23, 2008 5:57 pm

Indeed Very Happy
It's set in modern time. I hope it'll turn out to be good, but for now, it's just for fun, and to see if I can get noticed.
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Wed Jul 23, 2008 6:03 pm

lol it also doesn't hurt if your "fun" can get you money...legally XD
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Wed Jul 23, 2008 6:19 pm

LOL, aw... legally? I'll take Stargate to the courts!!!! JK Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Wed Jul 23, 2008 6:19 pm

lol I said legally cause if I didn't add that it made you sound like a prostitute XD
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Wed Jul 23, 2008 6:27 pm

LOL, yes... yes... it's funnier this way Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Thu Jul 24, 2008 4:57 am

As I already said Mitchel, sounds awesome. But if you don't tell me who stole the golden potatoes soon... I'm going to get angry... and... you wouldn't like me when I'm...

*copywright police run into the room"

... in such a good mood I could DANCE!

*begins to dance around the room*
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Thu Jul 24, 2008 5:42 am

its okay they have extra silver potatoes!
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Thu Jul 24, 2008 5:47 am

Well put Amy Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Thu Jul 24, 2008 10:31 am

I'm gonna start digging in my garden to find gold/silver foods... I need monies...

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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Thu Jul 24, 2008 10:36 am

LOL, just don't eat them, they only lead to pain and the hospital...
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Thu Jul 24, 2008 7:21 pm

I can just see it now " WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU EATING! ITS A GOLD MINE IN HERE!"
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Thu Jul 24, 2008 9:40 pm

and they would leave me dead on the table and take of with my tummy money....

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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Thu Jul 24, 2008 11:24 pm

OR, they could just sell your entire tummy, stating that it's juices will cause eternal awesomeness.
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Fri Jul 25, 2008 12:17 am

no! they would take most of it sew you up and tell you ya need to come back in a couple of weeks for another surgery! XD
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Fri Jul 25, 2008 5:31 am

Or they may just do what we do when we need a kidney from an unruly donor. Knock 'em out, take the kidney, and write "see a doctor" in blood on the wall.
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Fri Jul 25, 2008 9:11 am

........ my tummy hurts now....

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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Fri Jul 25, 2008 1:13 pm

Hey and Cam! Remember if you need any actual military knowledge or comfirmation that something is physically possible, drop me an e-mail Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Fri Jul 25, 2008 10:25 pm

Tony Stark wrote:
Hey and Cam! Remember if you need any actual military knowledge or comfirmation that something is physically possible, drop me an e-mail Wink

For example... if you need to know if ray-gun-awesome-weapon-firing-space-ship-destroyer-guns actually exhist, drop him a line. Or consult a comic book. EVERYTHING in comics are real. Just look at the guy above me. lol Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Fri Jul 25, 2008 10:46 pm

You mean... there really is a nerd in some city swinging from building to building taking pictures of himself and selling them to the news paper?

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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Fri Jul 25, 2008 10:47 pm

LOL! Well, I know about a few secret programs being developed right now Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Warp Gate 0012   Sat Jul 26, 2008 12:08 am

See a doctor. lol Very Happy
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