Here is one I did along time ago... lol
StarGate Zéta Site
Brig. General Jonathan Murray
Dr. Donald Shyer
SZ-1 (Exploration, Covert Ops, Diplomacy)
Lt. Col Derek Redman
Jaffa Warrior. Kava
Major. Jeffery Thomson
Dr. Melissa Preston
SZ-2 (Medical, Assault, Search & Rescue)
Lt. Col. Donny Fielder
Capt. Zackary Davis
Lt. Alex Biell
Major. Bryan Davis
Airman Thomas Goodman Gate/Iris Controls
Dr. Silvia Krivok
Dr. Danny Christianson Doctor
Tech Sgt. Wallis Green
Staff Sgt. Richard Geary
2nd. Lt. Kathy Header
Dr. Don L White
StarGate Zéta Site
The 3rd City
Base Alarm Sirens
ARM. Goodman: Incoming Wormhole, Closing iris
Redman and Kava race into the control room
LT. Col. Redman: Who is it Goody?
Kava: Goody? Sir?
Goodman: “Sighs” Unknown Sir, we’re not getting an IDC.
Redman to Kava: Goody, it’s a, nick name…. kinda… Don’t you Jaffa ever have nick names?
Kava: What is a “nick name”?
Redman: Never mind…….
Tech Sgt. Wallis Green: That’s odd….
Goodman: Wormhole has disengaged. Opening Iris.
Green to Redman: Sir, we were getting some strange readings from the gate.
Redman: How so?
Green: Well it was sending through some kind of signal I’ll analyze it and see what I can find out.
Green walks off to his lab
Redman to Goodman: Keep up the good work Goody!
Redman and Kava leave
Goodman to Dr. White: I hate him sometimes…..
Maj. Thomson and Dr. Preston are walking down a corridor
Thomson: Look I’m just saying if it was just round like every other ball, this it wouldn’t be a foot ball!
Preston: You know all I asked you this morning was “will you have breakfast with me?” and you rambling on about why a foot ball of all things is shaped like a foot ball?… “sighs“ Men….
Preston walks away
Thomson: What?! Ahh c’mon! I was trying to make conversation!
Brig. General Jonathan Murray Office:
Murray: Oh god, another day in paradise… Hmm…
Redman nocks on the door
Redman: Can I, bother you, for a while?
Murray: Of course, your more then welcome to… I was just doing some paper work….
Redman: I know you Jack, your never doing paper work.
Murray: I do sometimes, when--
Just then Green rushes in
Green: Sir!… Uh, Sir’s! I have some new information on that signal we got this morning.
Murray: What did you find Doctor?
Green: Well it’s Altaren.
Green: Yes Sir. It seems it’s an older Altaren distress signal.
Murray: Derek, assemble you team and be ready to leave at 13:00 hours. And take Green with you.
Green: Me, ma-ma me? Sir?
Redman: Him? Sir?
Murray: Yes him, he’s our biggest expert on Altaren technology and if there IS something on that planet, you’ll need him.
Redman: yes Sir.
Later in the Gate Room
Redman: Dial it up Goody!
Goodman: Dialing P4M- 696.
Redman: So? You guys think we’ll find something worth bringing home?
Kava: I would be more worried about coming home alive.
Thomson: You always have to be a downer don’t you? Cant you ever lighten up? Shies!
Preston: If you had lived her life you think you would be as care free as you are now?
Thomson: I could have had her life and still been like this---
Kava: Try having a demon live inside you stomach for most of you life. We will see if you will still laugh carelessly.
Redman: Alright kids calm down, don’t make me turn this wormhole around.
Green: Theoretically it is possible, but you would need to convert the--- Why are you looking at me like that?
Redman: It’s gonna be a long trip.
Murray: SZ-1 Your have a go. Good luck.
The team walks through to the other side.
Thomson: Wow! That was a long trip…
Redman: Alright Thomson your starting to get on MY nerves. Green! Lead the way…
Green: Uh, yes sir…..
After a few hours
Thomson: Damn… Green I thought you said you could find this thing? I don’t feel like walking around the whole planet.
Green: No, I, it’s around here… somewhere… This thing says we are right on top of it! I, I don’t get it….
Redman points to a large tower off in the distance: Well….. THAT couldn’t be it could it?
Green: Oh my…
Preston: it looks like the center spire of Atlantis
Green: No it’s different, but the scale is huge… it, it must be an older model?
Thomson; Didn’t Sheppard and his team find a second city?
Redman: Yea…. They did…
Kava: This would explain why you thought we were on top of it… Would it not?
Green: Do you know what this could mean?!
Green: This means there could have been fleets of Atlantis sized ships out there! And we found our own! On an empty world! Ha!!!
Redman: Hold on there sparky, someone had to turn that distress signal on.
Green: Oh yea….. Ahh, damn it. Well maybe we found some Atlantians?
Redman: Thomson head back to the gate, let em know what we found. I think we’ll have a look see.
Later at the spire
Green: oh my god it’s so beautiful… I could just
Preston: Don’t get to attached, she might have someone remember?
Green: cute, very cute. I’m just admiring it…
Redman; we should look for away in, Green your with me. Kava, Preston, search around the spire.
While Redman and green search
Preston: So…. Did you have anyone? Back home?
Kava: I prefer not to talk about my past thank you.
Preston: Hmm, well I don’t mind. I had a guy on Earth, his name was Allen. He was about 6 foot--
Kava: Please, spare me, I have no need nor do I want to know.
Preston stops walking for a moment “Hmph…”
Redman: you know Green if you didn’t stutter, invested in some of those contact lenses and maybe just maybe if you didn’t talk about Atlantis 24-7.. Girls might talk to you a little more….
Green: I know, I just, I don’t know I can’t--- Wait a second… I’m picking up an energy signal. I think I found a, WAHOO! There is a small door about 3 feet down!
Redman: Well I didn’t bring a shovel… Did you?
Green: Well you’re the combat trained one… cant you just blow it up or something?
Redman: Fine… go stand over there
A few moments later
Green: Alright! Think you dug down far enough?
Redman: Well…. You can dig the rest out…. Kava, Preston. We found a way in. Head south about 2 clicks.
Green jumps in: It’s dark down here. There should be a panel somewhere, I’ll see if I can activate the lights or something….
Redman: Right… Well hurry up, looks like it’s going to rain… I don’t like being wet.
Green: Yea, yea… Ahh ha! You little pain you, thought you could avoid me eh? He-he…
Redman: Are you talking to the city?
Green: There, see? Your good Wallis, real good….
Redman: Stop talking to yourself too…. It creeps me out…
Back at the StarGate
Thomson reaches for is radio: Hey I heard that, Can I come back now? It’s raining out here! Guys? Hello?
Green and Redman explore the under parts of the city
Green To Redman: Aren’t you going to answer him?
Redman: Nah… He’s trained to handle worse.
Meanwhile Kava and Preston get to the entrance
Kava wave’s Preston down to the ground: I hear something.
Preston: I don’t hear anything
Kava: Silence, there is something out there.
Kava Readies her Staff Weapon: Preston get inside.
Kava runs off into the woods
Preston; ….uh…. Ok…. I hate it when she does that.
Kava slowly creeps up on some bushes when a Wraith jumps out! Kava swings her Staff at him hitting him in the head, and he lunges at her with a knife. Kava turns and he falls to the ground then she fires a shot into his back. Killing him then reaches for her radio.
Kava: Redman, be careful, I just killed a wraith….
Redman: A what?!
Kava: Do you not know of the wraith?
Redman: I KNOW WHAT A WRAITH IS! What I meant was WHY is one here!
Green whispers: Why is there an ancient city in the milky way galaxy?
Redman looks at green: Shut up….
Thomson: OK! I really want to come back now!
Redman: ok everyone back to the gate.
Preston walks out of the spire heading for the gate only to be captured by 4 Wraith guards
Redman: where the hell is Preston?
Green: Maybe she went back already?
Redman on the radio: Preston! Preston where the hell are you?
To be continued.